भाउ

चोरेको बन्दुकले काम नगरेसी
बुइगलबाट चिर्पट ल्याएं
दुई फक्लेटा पार्छु भनेर
टाउकोमा आँखा चिम्लेर बजाएं
के सारो अरठो हौ
त्यस्को बजिया टाउको
अपमानित मेरो नाक-कान
काटेर बेच्ने भो पाजिले
असनको बजारमा
“प्रचन्ड” भाउमा ।

5 responses to “भाउ

  1. I also used to feel difficult to understand ur poems but after reading 10-15 times the poem “Uniharu Malai Kehi Vandainan”..I think i am now starting to understand ur poems …

    It is used to say that poems are ” the feeling of heart ” …and u have two way to write – one way writes what u feel and the other way shows the something near u ….u mix up these two things mostly…may i wrong ..plz correct me ..

    Je hosh प्रचन्ड ko lagi chahi darai upahar ho yo ..ha ha …
    प्रचन्ड ko भाउ kati sasto ????? ha ha

    • Dear Prabesh and MilonKhai .. how to explain it .. extreme feeling maa lekheko huda explanation didaa jhanai confusion hunchah ki jasto laagchha !!

  2. i liked the word and presentation of poem. but its really very difficult to understand. whatever i conclude may be different then that u want to tell. so… i need your explanation..

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